16/08/19
Fear and a sense of curiosity shudders through my spine, my eyes glued to the mysterious object sitting on my desk. Curiosity gets the better of me and I leap to my feet. The glowing sphere shape gets brighter every step I take, but I wasn’t scared anymore. I had a feeling of warmth that spread through my body. Touch surprisingly a cold sharp sensation on my fingers, as the glow dims my eyes squint for a moment. Once my eyes resume open what I see is shocking at first, as it is not what I had imagined. What I saw didn’t even appear magical it was just a globe, just a globe I thought shorly not it had been glowing.....
Hi, This piece of writing had a good use of descriptive writing. The writing is also hooking at hooking the reader in. Maybe you could use paragraphs to break up your writing.
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